Outnumbered pencils

I’m guest-arting the back cover of issue #5 of Outnumbered [link], a local comic about super-powered teenage punks versus drug-dealing wererats. Today I went to the semi-regular Vancouver Comicon and hung out at the Critical Hit Comics table trying to finish the pencil art. I got it mostly done, and now present for critique. At the top you can see I’ve erased the helmet that one of the wererats is pulling off the head of the character Ruckus, I’ll come back to that later. Other than that, is there anything that sticks out at you as requiring a fix?

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Ant Lion

Initial character designs for Ant Lion. What cartoon lions are there? Well there’s all the lions in Lion King, which are quite Disneyish, then there’s the lion from the WB cartoon “Hold the Lion” and “The Lion’s Busy” and probably others. Then there’s also apparently a Hanna Barbara character called Lippy the Lion. lippy.jpg

Can anyone think of anyone else?

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Addendum:

Art Tutor?

Hey here’s a question for you. I saw a ‘wanted: art tutor” ad on a billboard at a comic shop and I thought – maybe I could do that. So the question is, what’s a reasonable tuting rate to ask for?

Secondly, I’ve been slowwwwwwwly reading “Your Call is Important to Us: The Truth About Bullshit” and now so are you:

My objection to advertising is not merely aesthetic. Each and every shill is a tax-deductible cost of doing business, and thus a double insult. The billions that companies spend to convince you that you are a smelly, yellow-toothed porker translate into millions fewer for the public purse and drive up the price of products. A pair of Nikes only costs a few bucks to make, but it costs a lot to get Michael Jordan…. Advertising attempts above all to sanctify mass-produced crap with a halo of uniqueness and beauty, or deliciousness and comfort, or coolness and Xtremity. Ads determine…how we perceive ourselves and even what we do. There is, for example, mounting evidence that we may be making ourselves ill with our ad-induced scrubbing. While we scour the world to a sterile gleam and mock the mammal scents of our continental friends, research tells us that kids in slightly grimy houses have a lower incidence of asthma than those who live in immaculate surroundings. And antibiotic hand washes only accelerate the development of more resistant bugs, a process already well underway thanks to the mass prescribing of antibiotics.

Just a note: I am not inherently against advertising (obviously since I do it myself to some extent, and I was in a commercial). Also there’s too much rhetoric and not enough citations. But…I am enjoying the book.

Also I saw Blades of Glory and it made me guffaw. It’s playing at the Rio still. I didn’t realize Tuesdays were $5 there. Or did I?

SSZ Page Three!

Consistency is NOT the name of the game. With each page I’m trying out something new. On this page there are four changes:

1. The font is different (thanks Stewie).
2. The tone is not pixelated, but smooth.
3. There’s a lot more ink on the page! As you can clearly see.
4. The balloons are all perfect ellipses. It’s quicker that way but I don’t think the comic prof approves. We’ll see.

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So for the first panel, if you look at the older pencils you can see how different the ship is. I was having a hard time with the tines in this panel so at the behest of my prof I downloaded the free google 3D modelling program “sketchup” and made a dirty model of SSZ, which I can view from any angle. It worked like a charm. A CHARM I TELL YOU!

The following pics are NOT from that program. They are much nicer:

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