Still some tweaking to do, but…
Lobster Johnson & Emerald City
I just found out via the Hellboy Animated blog that Mike Mignola is doing a Lobster Johnson comic and I like that idea. On a related note, those of you who get Cartoon Network – Hellboy: Blood and Iron premieres March 17 (on DVD June 12 – the first one was good but not great, by the way, but I will purchase the second to support the production of the third).
At the end of the month there is a big comic con in Seattle called Emerald City. If I get my passport back in time I’m seriously thinking about going down to check it out. Anyone else interested? PS – car an asset.
SSZ Comic pages 1-2 Pencils
Comic Update
I have now made a blog category for the comic, so you can see all the comic entries by clicking http://www.thickets.net/toren/category/comicbook/
I was in such a crap mood on Wednesday. I got a flat tire on my bikey bike on Sunday night and broke my hand pump trying to fix it. How crap is that? A flat tire and a useless pump. So anyway I took it in to the Bike Doctor (did you know that most bike shops aren’t open on Monday – and did you know that all of my bike repair needs have been on Mondays?) and decided to get a tune up as well. The guys there decided I needed new brakes for both tires and a new rear tire (not just the tube) as well. So my flat tire turned into a $120 bill. I’m sure all that stuff was needed as I take about as much care of my bike as I did my automobiles back in the day (did I tell you the story of how I left my Reliant K car on the side of the road with its engine on fire?), but it still sucked. Add to that the stress of getting my passport and some relationship hiccups and I was stressed out. But – the bike is fixed and rides much better, the passport is on its way in 4 weeks, and things are splendiferous with Joyce again, so all is well.
After dealing with the crud, I spent most of my time on Wednesday working on the comic. This turned out to be just like doing D&D illos over the past few years. I spent almost no time drawing and almost all of the time looking for photo references on the interweb – helicopters, snow cats, even parkas and mountains. I am trying to keep as much “freehand” as possible, i.e. no photo reference, because I find that the more I rely on photo reference, the less personal style I put into the drawing, and that’s a habit I’m trying to get out of (this is something that Mike commented on from my recent drawings). But I have never drawn a helicopter before so cut me some slack here.
Other good news is that I put the cash down for an 11×17″ scanner so I will be able to scan in the full comic pages in fewer fell swoops than otherwise possible. After being unable to get it through local computer stores (they’re made in California and don’t have a Canadian distributor), I found an eBay store in Richmond that is going to ship it to me. Came to about $225 including shipping, methinks. Much better than the $1500-2000 models sold in Canada, and Kevin* from Outnumbered ( http://criticalhitcomics.com/ ) sings its praises as he has the same model. I’ve been doing the pencils in non-photo blue so I can’t really give you my progress so far (yet), but page 1 is indeed coming along. Steve brought along a copy of his PERSPECTIVE FOR COMIC BOOK ARTISTS to the last class which looks good, and plainly explained for dunces like myself, but upon looking it up on amazon.ca I see it is not available. So I’ll have to hunt for it on eBay.
(*I also bought some Blue Line comic book paper from The Comicshop so I am in a better position to finish the wererat splash that I promised Kevin for issue 5)
Revised SSZ Comic Thumbnails
Spaceship Zero: The Comic – More Thumbnails
Here’s pages 3 and 4
A lot of comics I’ve been looking at have only three, maybe four ‘tiers”, which is to say horizontal strip layers. My comic seems to have four minimum, because I’m trying to cram so much dialogue into just four pages. So Steve told me to watch out for balloon sizes. I have to make sure that when I compose the panels I leave enough room in for all the words. He told me to scan a comic book page and reduce it to the same size as my thumbnails page. I did it:
Not too far off, I think.
Funnybooks
I’ve already shown you my character designs for the Spaceship Zero comic book.
Now I’m gonna give you s’more: thumbnails and script.
Steve gave us samples of actual comic scripts that he has worked on, including MEK by Warren Ellis. The three he gave us had similarities but the format differed somewhat. Basically, comic scripts are a lot like TV/movie scripts. Mine is very loose because at the moment it’s just written for my own reference – so I know who is saying what and how many balloons it’s going to take up. Skip it if you want. There’s pics below.
SPACESHIP ZERO #1
By Toren AtkinsonPAGE ONE
Panel 1.
CAPTION: Antarctica, 2023
WALTERS: Professor Ashton, Im John Walters.
ASHTON: Dreadful.
WALTERS: Uh, I hope the trip wasnt too uncomfortable.
ASHTON: I despise flying. Where is the site?
Panel 3
WALTERS: Its about one mile southwest. We couldnt pitch camp any closer due to
ASHTON: Are we to travel in that thing?
WALTERS: Yes. Weve prepared a room and a meal for y
ASHTON: I would like to go immediately.
Panel 4
(beat)
WALTERS: Certainly.
Panel xxx
IN THE HALFTRACK
WALTERS: I gather from the Commodore that this vessel is tied into your project in a very profound way.
ASHTON: Seemingly
WALTERS: Well youve seen the data weve sent so far. Steveston took a carbon dating reading on the hull but the results were
ASHTON: completely meaningless.
Panel xxx
WALTERS: Well the surrounding ice is DEFINITELY thousands of years old. And if the ship isnt SpaceCorp then its a good goddamn replica. Im no ship buff, but from what Im told its a hopper.ASHTON: The images you sent didnt transfer very well.
WALTERS: I apologize for that. We couldnt get any clear, wide shots due to the weather. We took some this morning but of course thats no
ASHTON: Has anyone been inside?
STEVESTON: Were just clearing the hatch now, Professor Ashton.
Panel xxx
WALTERS: This is Heather Steveston, Professor.
STEVESTON: Heres this mornings readings. The tanks are apparently spent. Just residual traces of xenon as you can see.
Panel xxx
ASHTON: Is that it?
Panel xxx
STEVESTON: Hold on to the rope, Professor. Well have a much better view at the bottom.
Ashton slips?
Panel xxx
(Big shot)ASHTON: Good heavens!
Panel xxx
(C.U)ASHTON: It cant be.
STEVESTON: What is it, Professor?
ASHTON: Those tines . Staggering!
WALTERS: What about the tines?
STEVESTON: Theyre not standard to the Mark V Space Hopper, I know that much.
WORKMAN: Thats got it, Jensen.
Panel xxx
ASHTON: Let me through!
WORKMAN: Woah, hold up there, sir. Give the metal a chance to cool.
Panel xxx
(Walters produces an open box of ray guns)WALTERS: The commodore insisted we carry these, Professor.
ASHTON: What on Earth for?
Panel xxx
Walters shrugs
ASHTON: I have never in my life discharged a firearm.
WALTERS: Commodores orders.
ASHTON: SIGH (takes a gun and holster)
Panel xxx
This metal is rather deteriorated.STEVESTON: That coincides with our readings from this ice.
WORKMAN: Okay. Here are some torches.
Panel xxx
They move through the hulk by flashlight
Panel xxx
STEVESTON: Looks pretty intact to me.
WALTERS: What level is this?
STEVESTON: Reactor is up one more. Readings are normal.
Panel xxx
ASHTON: Hmm. I wonder .
WALTERS: Weir, do you have that cable ready?
Panel xxx
WALTERS: The T6 has completely lost its charge and the heads are shot. Give me three minutes.
STEVESTON: Wheres Ashton?
Panel xxx
Steveston looking for Ashton
Panel xxx
STEVESTON: Ashton?
ASHTON: Its here. This is it. The entire module. Its staggering. Its completely impossible.
Panel xxx
Power comes on revealing the BTL Drive.ASHTON: Completely impossible.
PAGE FOUR
Panel xxx
Ashton and Walters in dim room
WALTERS: Yawn! You want something to eat? Professor? PROF!
ASHTON: No, for heavens sakes, Walter! No!
WALTERS: Walters. John Walters. Well I do. Download is slow going. Ill bring you something back. Give a yell on the blower if you need anything.Panel xxx
Monitor reads: 7 LIFEFORMS IN DECON
ASHTON: Hello, whats this? Walter, look at this. Eh?
Panel xxx
Ashton on computer.
DATA FILE CORRUPT. REPAIR / DIAGNOSTIC / EXIT
BIOSPEC INTACT
DECONSTITUTION INITIATEDPanel xxx
Ashton watches as decon does its thing
Panel xxx Ashton reacts to deconstituted thing out of frame
Panel xxx
Hand reaches for gun
Feel free to comment/proofread! One of the most challenging things for me is arranging the characters and the word balloons so they flow properly, naturally, and clearly. It’s actually pretty difficult to do that and still keep the panel compositions interesting! As you can tell from the text above, when I wrote the script I didn’t really know what panels were going to be on what page, except for page four. Here are the almost completed first two pages.
I think at some point I’ll take some reference photos of poses in winter coats. Any volunteers? Who wants to be in a comic boooook?
Spaceship Zero: The Comic
The comic book production course I’m taking at Van Arts is pretty good so far. I dropped $90 at Loomis but I didn’t really have to. I just wanted the good brush, the aluminum cork-backed ruler, and a few other things. Has anyone heard of the Aames Lettering Guide?
As I may have mentioned, the other kids in the class are kind of weird. But then, that’s comic geeks for you. Oh wait – none of them read comics. So that is weird. At any rate, I’m learning, and making decent progress. We had our third class last week, and we talked about storytelling and whatnot. Steve is always apologetic for the amount of handouts but I think it’s great. That way I don’t have to commit anything to memory! His teaching style is mostly to just go over the handouts and he usually does so verbatim which kind of useful but I’d rather get something on top of what’s on the handout, but I guess if there were more information he’d just put it on the handout to start with.
I handed in my character sketches for the four pages I’ll be doing. This is really just the prologue for the big story (will I ever finish it? Who knows) so the only main character present is Professor Ashton. But there are a few supporting characters. Here are the results:
Soon I should have some thumbnails for you all.
In other news, I’m nearly done Guitar Hero II on HARD, much to Stewie’s chagrin. Hey, it’s not my fault he leaves it in the living room and then doesn’t play it. He says if I finish it before him he is going to charge me. So I’ll just get 99% through Free Bird and then hit the reset button.
Does anyone know what causes that ‘BZZZZZZZZZZZT-BZT-BZT-BZT-BZT” sound that I hear in my headphones when I pass a certain place in the city on the Greyhound, and that I hear in my computer speaker when my cell phone goes off nearby?
World Wildlife Federation of Justice and their foes
Greetings, False Believers! If you’re viewing this page from another link, there’s a much nicer and more recently updated WWFJ page here:
http://www.worldwildlifefederationofjustice.com/
Okay here’s what I did at work today. Get excited! Preston Blair’s animation book really helped me come to a happy medium between cartoony and superheroicy. More in style with Captain Carrot than my previous attempts in ’04. As many of you know, I ran a Mutants & Masterminds/Spaceship Zero game set in a “funny animal” universe which I ran at home and at VGG Game Days. These are some of the characters that were played by players, and NPCs that worried the players or fleshed out the background. I’ll be adding more characters in the not-too-distant future.
First off: Mandrill…or Astromandrill? He was a big gun in the World Wildlife Federation of Justice universe. He was actually a founding member of the WWFJ.
The Great Wolverini – Master of the Mystic Skills. Note the moustache and arcane eyebrows. Also a senior member of the WWFJ.
After looking at some cool Alex Toth drawings, here’s a redux for GW:
He’ll bite your head off, man. Dupligator is a new addition I just made up. He strikes me as a low-level hero. Maybe a part-time member or someone who hasn’t proved their worth yet.
Modelled slighty off of WB’s Junior Bear.
Who’s next? Why, it’s Stewie’s favourite (and the love child of Grape Ape and Magilla), Go-Rilla. He was part of the player character group who was striving to gain the notice of the WWFJ.
The WWFJ’s strong man, Porcules. Note the beard.
Oh my god why do I love this guy so much? And what’s going on with the costume there? A foul villain.
And why do so many of these guys have the stiff cowls? Don’t ask the ubiquitous Rhinosferatu:
He’s evil!
I’ve got so many more to go! Gnucleus…Tarmadillo…Psyrax (who knows what a hyrax is?)…Mad Cow…Haardvark…Tasmanian Daredevil…etc etc. I wanna do a comic. Even if it’s only a one-shot.
ADDENDUM:
Better that he looks like Daffy than Donald. Try to imagine green feathers and maybe a dark blue costume. I may even get rid of the shirt and just have the metal vest and belt. I picture Earthquack as a bad guy.
Sorta ran out of paper on the left there. Oops. Originally I pictured Octopussycat as sort of a Batman character. She was a gadget girl, but everything was octopus-themed. Now she strikes me more as a gal with octopus powers…camouflage, ink, sticky suction. I guess mostly I just liked the name. Cuz I’m not sold on the visuals, even though she’s got a kind of blue-ringed octopus motif going there.
Okay here’s a redux on Octopussycat:
Still not satisfied. This third version is a little leg-bendy, but my favourite so far:
MORE ADDENDUM:
Here’s one of the WWFJ’s founders, the Llamazon(ian).
Move over Gleek, Blip and Abu, here’s the WWFJ’s answer to Aquaman–Sea Monkey! Are those fins still there when he takes his costume off? I don’t know! I don’t wanna know!
What if you took Tex Avery’s big bad wolf (you know, the one from Red Hot Riding Hood) and mixed him with Wile E. Coyote and gave him a super suit? Why, you’d get Crackerjackal of course.
But is he a good guy or a bad guy? Hard to tell with that moustache.
STILL FURTHER ADDENDUM (How many more can I do?)
Woe betide the fool who crosses the infernal deviant, Elk Diablo
and his incompetent sidekick, Hellhound!
Here’s a little guy who is also destined to stay in the Sidekick Lounge, Bugbear. Note the dial on his belt that he uses for…something.
A little cutesy, I know. But wait! Here by special request is Shaolin Monkey (you can’t really see the shaved head but I did make a point of not adding hair):
One of my new favourites, Dynamole:
I was gonna give him big thick glasses, like every cartoon mole must have, but then I thought goggles were cooler, and the antenna, gizmo belt and backpack followed naturally.
But no one can trump my new favourite (except for Rhinosferatu of course), arch-nemesis of The Great Wolverini, the ruthless Salamancer:
There’s something so right about funny animal supers getting the Kirby treatment. In hindsight I should have added some extravagant technodoodle to the tip of his tail just to busy it up that one notch further.
I’ve come to the conclusion that I can’t draw guns. Oh well, here’s The Toad Warrior:
Beware the diamond claws of Haardvark:
I like Tasmanian Daredevil, but I think he would be cooler as a she. Maybe later. Meantime:
Or, what if Tasmanian Daredevil was a woman?
Here’s Elephantom. I don’t know why I coloured in bits of him, he should be transparent. Too much like Gentleman Ghost? I think so. I’ll give him another pass later on.
Ok let’s try this one:
Here’s the evil mastermind, Dark Horse:
And the terror of tiny toon, Micronewt:
I don’t know what the deal is with the tuning forks, I just thought they looked cool.
What happens when Sylvester gets abducted by the Master Control Program? You get Datalynx.
I really enjoy Cardinal Sin, though I think his outfit needs work. Or maybe less work.
Thanks to Kerry for this one – Orangutangler:
And this one – Baboom!
The Wooly Marmot. Not to scale. (He’s huge!)
This costume is too generic for my tastes, maybe I’ll give him a makeover later, but in the meantime, this picture of Starbuck will have to do. Silly thing is while I was drawing him I thought “this one should be female” but then of course I realized that I’d have to rename her Stardoe and that didn’t have the same ring to it.
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