Here’s pages 3 and 4
A lot of comics I’ve been looking at have only three, maybe four ‘tiers”, which is to say horizontal strip layers. My comic seems to have four minimum, because I’m trying to cram so much dialogue into just four pages. So Steve told me to watch out for balloon sizes. I have to make sure that when I compose the panels I leave enough room in for all the words. He told me to scan a comic book page and reduce it to the same size as my thumbnails page. I did it:
Not too far off, I think.