Critique: Crackerjackal

I think I’m about 60% done on Crackerjackal.

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I wanted to give him a hat but I couldn’t think of anything that wasn’t Robin Hood, and he already looks too much like Disney’s Robin Hood (fox). Especially because of the shirt. It’s a challenge to reconcile the superhero costume and the funny animal motif of shirt with no pants (a la Porky Pig & Donald Duck) but I am erring on the side of funny animal, generally. I don’t want to get too complicated in these designs.

xmightymouseYES.

toast1NO.

cableDEFINITELY NO. WHO LET THIS GUY IN HERE?