Please critique!

I thought I had previously posted with a rough mockup of a new Thickets shirt, but maybe it was Facebook. The idea is an homage to the classic metal t-shirt, a la Iron Maiden, with an over-the-top, gory skull, blood & fire fest on a black shirt. I won’t give too much away, except for the image here is a rough sketch of one of the elements of the full t-shirt design…
Toren will be showing paintings, drawings, and comic art from the past 14 years of his illustration career including stuff from Call of Cthulhu, Dungeons & Dragons, and his HP Lovecraft-inspired rock band The Darkest of the Hillside Thickets. There will be plenty of tentacles and orcs! It all happens at his favourite restaurant – The Wallflower. Try their ‘apple pie’ – it will knock your socks off!
Opening Gala: Saturday October 2 @ 8pm-10pm
2420 Main Street (@ 8th Ave), between RX Comics and Pulp Fiction
The art comes down at the end of the month.
Here’s a sketch I did while waiting in the doctorb’s office (the ‘b’ is for ‘bargain’) of Vigilantelope. It’s fine technically but I find the character boring. I think I need to make him more memorable somehow. I think I’m going to trade in the cape for a v-shaped shield and gruff him up a bit. Any suggestions?
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